How do you write a web fiction blurb that converts?
Updated · By the PlotWrite team · 60-second read
A web fiction blurb that converts has four parts: a one-sentence hook stating the central conflict, one or two lines of stakes, a line that shows the story's voice, and an open question the reader cannot answer from the blurb. Keep it under 100 words and make every line concrete.
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- The blurb is the second thing a Royal Road browser judges after the cover.
- What are the four parts of a good blurb?
- What is the hook?
The blurb is the second thing a Royal Road browser judges after the cover. Writers often spend weeks on the cover and twenty minutes on the blurb, which is backwards.
What are the four parts of a good blurb? A hook, stakes, voice and an open question. Together they should fit in under 100 words.
What is the hook? A single sentence stating the central conflict in concrete terms. Not "a young hero must save the world" but "the empire's last sword-saint hunts the demon wearing his brother's face." Specific is sticky. Generic is invisible.
What are stakes? What the protagonist stands to lose, or has already lost, in one or two lines. Stakes give the hook weight. "He has 30 days before the demon takes his daughter too" is a stake. "He must protect his family" is a vague gesture.
How do you show voice? One line that sounds like the story. If your prose is dry-witted, this line is dry-witted. If your prose is grim, this line is grim. Readers on Royal Road have seen many plots like yours, so voice is often what separates yours.
What is the open question? An open thread that the reader cannot resolve from the blurb alone. It does not need a question mark: "And the demon knows things only his brother could know." This line is the click-through driver.
How long should a blurb be? Under 100 words. Browsers scan blurbs quickly, so a 250-word blurb is skimmed or skipped, while a 90-word blurb gets read in full. Short is a safe default, though it is a rule of thumb rather than measured data.
What should you cut? Backstory before the inciting hook, world-building exposition, comparable titles ("perfect for fans of...") and reviewer quotes. Some of these can live below the cover image as supporting copy, but not in the blurb itself.
A blurb makes a promise, so the first chapters have to keep it. The Royal Road chapter hook guide covers how to open chapter one, and how to design a Royal Road cover covers the other half of the click. If you write LitRPG, the free LitRPG title generator can help with a title that matches the blurb.
Frequently asked questions
How long should a Royal Road blurb be?
Aim for under 100 words. Shorter blurbs are easier to scan on a browse page, and the hook should land in the first sentence.
Should a blurb include comparable titles or reviews?
No. Cut "perfect for fans of..." lines and reviewer quotes from the blurb. If you use them, put them in supporting copy rather than the blurb itself.
Do I need a question at the end of a blurb?
You need an open thread, not a literal question mark. End on something the reader cannot resolve without opening chapter one.
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Related quick answers
What is the best cliffhanger formula for web fiction?
The best web fiction cliffhanger uses three lines: a sudden reversal, one concrete sensory detail, and an unanswered question the reader finishes in their own head. End on a short line with white space after it, not a long paragraph or vague dread.
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How do you write a strong chapter 1 for Royal Road?
A strong Royal Road chapter 1 opens on one concrete, sensory moment, reaches the inciting incident within roughly the first 1,500 words, shows the protagonist making a real choice, and ends on a forward question that pulls the reader into chapter 2. Most readers decide from the first page whether to follow, so it is the highest-leverage chapter you will write.
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